Question

14．假设你是李杰，正通过 e-mail 和美国友好姐妹校的朋友 Tom 交流校纪班规，请你用英语向他介绍下面的"班级公约"．

要求：
1、内容完整，书写清楚，表达通顺，书写规范；
2、请勿逐字翻译，词数90左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数．
参考词汇：school uniform；be active in thinking 
Dear Tom，
I'd like to introduce my class rules made by us all．First，we should…
It's our duty to follow all the rules above．What about yours？Please write soon．
                                                                           Yours，
                                                                            Li Jie．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文的主题是谈论班级公约，交流班规校纪，贴近学生实际，因为是纪律规定，所以描述起来，可以用一般现在时态，并且可以用到must、have to/ought to/be supposed to等句式．

解答 Dear Tom．，
I'd like to introduce my class rules made by us all．First，we should come to school on time in school uniforms．It's
polite to greet our teachers when we meet them．Second，we must listen carefully in class and be active in thinking．Also，we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time．Third，we need clean the classroom often and always keep it clean．And we're required to turn off lights and close windows and doors before we leave．Fourth，being friendly is important．
We're supposed to get along well and help each other to make progress together．It's our duty to follow all the rules
above．What about yours？Please write soon．
Yours，
Li Jie

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．