Question

【题目】 假如你是李华，你们学校组织了一场校园旅行。请你根据所给提示和要求，写一篇短文描述一下你们此次的活动。

提示：(1)When and where did you have the school trip?

(2)How did you feel about it?

要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

(2)短文中不要出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

It was sunny on April 13rd. We went on a school trip.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】【高分范文】

It was sunny on April 13rd. We went on a school trip. We visited the Greenery Farm and it was really interesting.

All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7：00 a．m., and went to the farm by bus. On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm, where we learned a lot about farming.

At noon, we had a picnic, during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine, singing, dancing and flying kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We took lots of pictures.

Time flied! It was time for us to leave though we didnt want to. It was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.

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