Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下面提示，完成短文。题目“My Ideal School”。词数80左右。

1.起床晚，所以希望上学晚，放学早。有很多的空余时间。

2学校餐厅大而明亮。可以在那里吃饭或聊天。

3.每天都上电脑课。每人一台电脑，可以玩游戏。

4.有藏书丰富的图书馆，网球场和游泳池。

5.作业少，课外活动多。周末不用做作业。

Answer 1

【答案】My Ideal School

I often get up late, so my ideal school starts at 9 a.m. It finishes at 3 p.m., so we will have more free time to play games. There is a big and bright dining hall. We can eat and chat there. We can have computer lessons every day. Everyone has a computer to play computer games. My ideal school has a library with lots of books, and it also has a tennis court and a swimming pool. We want to have less homework and more after-school activities. It will be better if we do not have to do any homework at weekends.

【解析】

本文是一篇提纲作文。要求根据提纲内容写一篇关于自己理想学校的文章。在写作之前要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。注意必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。这篇作文层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。用了大量短语，如want to do, after-school activities, have to do, at weekends, get up late等，为文章增色不少。