Question

【题目】七.书面表达(20分)

根据表格提供的信息，以My favourite season为题，写一篇短文介绍春季。

Answer 1

【答案】My favourite season

My favourite season is spring. Spring means life and growth. The trees begin to grow and green leaves come out. There are different kinds of flowers everywhere. Bees and butterflies are playing among them. Birds are singing beautifully in the trees.

It is warm and nice in spring. People like to go outside for fun. It is a perfect time to fly kites o n windy days. Parks are full of people at weekends. During this season, people will plant lots of trees. The trees can make our world more beautiful.

Spring not only lets us enjoy the beauty of nature , but also gives us lots of fun and hope. A year's plan starts with spring. Let's take action in spring!

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My favourite season”为题，结合所给的表格内容材料，介绍你最喜欢的季节—春季。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文章以“My favourite season is spring.”开头，开门见山，直入主题；文中come out，different kinds of，go outside for fun，everywhere, be full of，starts with, among等词(组)的恰当使用， 使上下文意连接紧密，表达恰切；同时使用了固定句型It is a perfect time to fly kites on windy days，并列句not only…but also…, 以及祈使句Let's take action in spring，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。