Question

【题目】

假如你是Jenny或Bob，你现在正在英国学习，你给你的朋友寄了三张照片，下面的表格中记录了这三张照片的情景，请根据表格中所提供的信息给你的朋友写信详细描述一下这三张照片。信的开头已给出。

	weather	activities (what you are doing)	place
photo 1	beautiful and sunny	play beach volleyball with friends (you)	beach
photo 2	rain heavily outside	read books (you), do homework (one of your class mates)	library
photo 3	windy and humid	listen to the teacher, learn to speak English (all the students in your class)	classroom

Dear friend,

Now I’m studying in the United Kingdom. Here are some of my photos.

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Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friend,

Now I’m studying in the United Kingdom. Here are some of my photos. In the 1st photo, I am playing beach volleyball with friends on the beach. It’s very beautiful and sunny. In the 2nd photo, it rains heavily outside. One of my classmates is doing homework, while I’m reading books in the library. In the last photo, it’s windy and humid. All the students in my class are listening to the teacher in the classroom.

Yours,

Jenny

【解析】试题分析：这篇作文所给材料详尽，写作时内容要明确，涵盖要求的所有信息，词数要合格，结构要严谨，流畅，语言使用要正确。我们需要的时态是现在进行时态,主要用到第一人称和第三人称。注意单词的拼写，书写工整，卷面干净，整齐。

写作亮点：这篇短文简洁明了，结构紧凑，准确表达了题目中的所有信息。并使用了连词while，副词heavily。在学习中要注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。