Question

【题目】书面表达

这是Ann家上周野餐时的照片，看图并发挥你的想象力，写一篇文章，60词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】This is a photo of Ann’s family. Look！ They were having a picnic in the park. Ann and her sister were watching the rabbit. The rabbit looks so funny. It was running in and out of the holes in the grass. Ann’s mother was watching some flowers. Maybe she was thinking of planting some flowers at home. Ann’s father and brother were running. How happy they were!

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如a photo of Ann’s family，have a picnic，in the park，look so funny，running in and out of the holes，in the grass，think of等。而They were having a picnic in the park. / The rabbit looks so funny./ Maybe she was thinking of planting some flowers at home.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少，是本篇习作的亮点。