Question

【题目】

安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的短文。

提示：1.体育锻炼；2.上下楼梯；

3．交朋结友；4.食品卫生。

要求：1.语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；

2．短文可以适当发挥，但要包含以上要点；

3．词数80～100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Safety has become the focus(焦点)to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.

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Answer 1

【答案】Safety has become the focus(焦点)to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.

First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second，there are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow. So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides，we should be friendly and get on well with others. Don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not the least，we should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health.

In a word，it's important to remember these for us all.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。短文用了一些连词while，when，which引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。