Question

【题目】书面表达。

同学们，你们的家里有没有一些小家规呢?比如父母要求你必须干什么。不能干什么。请以“My Family Rules”为题写一篇小短文。

Answer 1

【答案】My family rules

There are many rules in my house. I have to get up at six o'clock and be home at 6:30pm.I have to finish my homework after school.I can't watch TV and play computer games on school nights. I have to stay at home on school nights . Also,I have to do some housework.

My parents don’t allow me to stay up until 11:00 pm because they think teenagers may let their friend talk them into doing bad things . I think the most strict rule is that my parents do not allow me to watch TV at night ,although it is good for me ,I think it is a good way to have a rest . Though I don’t agree with some rules, I know my parents love me so I always obey my family rules.

【解析】

【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in my house，have to，get up，be home，finish my homework，after school，watch TV，stay at home，on school nights，do some housework，allow sb. to do，stay up，at night，be good for sb.，have a rest，agree with等。而My parents don’t allow me to stay up until 11:00 pm because they think teenagers may let their friend talk them into doing bad things . / I think the most strict rule is that my parents do not allow me to watch TV at night ,although it is good for me ,I think it is a good way to have a rest ./ Though I don’t agree with some rules, I know my parents love me so I always obey my family rules等复杂结构从句的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的最大亮点。