Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据下面的email中的内容，给Jack写一封回信。

要求：中心突出，语言简洁。

参考词汇：suppose，knock on the door，dress neatly，cut into line，offer seat，make noise，come into a room，say thanks，drop litter

词数：70左右。

Hi，Li Ming!

How are you? I'm writing to you to find out more about China's customs.Ideas of what are good manners are not always the same in different countries.For example，it's not polite to ask a person's age in America.What are good manners and what are bad manners in China? Could you please tell me?

Yours，

Jack

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack，

Good manners are very important.Everyone likes to make friends with a person with good manners.For example，people are supposed to knock on the door first before coming into a room.

It's polite to offer your seat to the old people on a bus.It's good for students to dress neatly at school.It's also good to say “thanks” after someone helps you.

What are bad manners? It's bad to cut into line，to make noise in public，to drop litter and so on.

Welcome to China！ Good luck!

Yours，

Li Ming

【解析】

试题这是一封邮件，结合所给词汇和来信内容，要把中国的一些好习惯和坏习惯有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了make friends, for example，be supposed to, offer…to…, be good for，cut into line ,make noise, in public等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰。还使用了固定句型It’s +形容词+to do sth., 以及时间状语从句，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。