Question

【题目】【2016山东枣庄】书面表达

Please write a passage of basketball in about 90 words according to the following mind map.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

James Naismith invented basketball. The first basketball game was played on December 21, 1981. Basketball became an Olympic event in Berlin in 1936. The NBA games are the most famous in the world and the CBA games are becoming more popular in China. There are two teams in a basketball game. Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team’s basket. At the same time, they need to stop the competing team from getting the ball into their own basket. It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍篮球的发展史以及打篮球的方法和它受欢迎的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般现在时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The first basketball game was ...，There are...，Players on the same team must...，they need to ...，It is played by ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了篮球的发明，接下来介绍篮球的发展和打篮球的方法，最后介绍篮球的受欢迎情况。此处in the world,become more popular,at the same time,need to do sth, stop sb from doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。