Question

【题目】图中女子Nancy 是个“手机控”，昨天她在街上因为使用手机发生了交通事故，请根据图片提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，简要描述这件事情，并谈谈自己的看法。

注意： 1. 短文已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。

2. 可适当增加细节， 使行文连贯、通顺。

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

4. 参考词汇： ambulance 救护车 stretcher 担架

Nancy is crazy about using a mobile--She uses it at table,in bed,even at work.

Yesterday when Nancy walking on the street.

Mobiles have become part of our lives.

Answer 1

【答案】Nancy is crazy about using a mobile--She uses it at table, in bed, even at work.

Yesterday when Nancy walking on the street, she took out her mobile and wanted to take a photo of herself. She helped to look best so she moved to the middle of the road. Soon a car drove by. The driver saw Nancy and try to stop the car, but it was too late. Nancy was hit and fell over. The driver called 120 at once and an ambulance came in no time. Luckily Nancy wasn’t badly hurt. She still kept on taking photos of herself when she was lying on the stretcher!

Mobiles have become part of our lives. Only when we use mobiles properly can we enjoy the convenient and pleasure. Otherwise we may get hurt,just like Nancy.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Nancy昨天在街上因为使用手机发生了交通事故，描述故事，表达自己的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Nancy is……，She helped to……，but it was……，Mobiles have become……，Otherwise we may……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。