Question

【题目】书面表达。

学校报社正在向同学们征集以My life in the future 为题的稿件，假如你是王海，请根据下列提示，展开联想，写一篇演讲稿，词数在80词左右。

提示：1.你未来会从事什么职业；

2.你未来的生活会是什么样子；

3.为了实现未来的生活，你现在应该怎么做。

注意： 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

My life in the future

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Answer 1

【答案】

Our Life in the Future

Life in the future With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will greatly be different from what it is today.

It is really interesting to imagine what our life will be like in the future. We can do almost everything at home．For example，we can log on line to read newspapers，pay telephone bills，do shopping and even see a doctor at home．To protect the environment，all cars will be powered by electricity，solar energy or wind so that we will have a tidy and green world．What’S more，people can travel in space．It will be very easy for us to visit other stars。such as the moon and the Mars．Almost any disease can be cured and people can enjoy a healthier and longer life．Besides, robots are popular in our homes and do a lot of housework for us.

A11 this can come true，I think，through our efforts．

【解析】

试题分析：试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文，话题是“Life in the future”，文章的要点都已经给出了。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇如differ from…不同于…，也有一些高级的句式结构， our life in the future will greatly be different from what it is today.中的what it is today的宾语从句。It is really interesting to imagine what our life will be like in the future.中的it作为形式主语。连词Besides等的使用也很合适，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。