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3．近年来，丰富多彩的课外活动（After-class activities）在许多学校受到学生们的广泛欢迎．某英文报社正在举办以"After-class activities"为题的英文征文活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇征文，介绍你们学校开展课外活动的情况．要点如下：
●最受欢迎的课外活动：球类运动、英语角交流等；
●参加课外活动的益处：学到更多知识、交到更多朋友等；
●你的建议：选择适合自己的课外活动，丰富课余生活．
注意：1．词数80-100；
 2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；
 3．征文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
After-class Activities
Recently，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in middle schools．       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：We are able to enrich our lives and get more new knowledge我们能够丰富我们的生活和获得更多的新知识．be able to do sth．能够做某事；enrich使…丰富．
高分句型二：In my opinion，we'd better choose the activities that interest us在我看来，我们最好选择我们感兴趣的活动．in one's opinion在某人看来；后面是一个由that引导的定语从句，先行词是the activities，that在定语从句中充当主语，故不能省略．

解答 Recently，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in middle schools．
We have many colorful and meaningful after-class activities in our school．We take an active part in all kinds of after-class activities．We especially like ball games．Practising our English at the English corner is another smart choice．Of course，we also have some other activities，such as swimming，running，playing computer games and so on．（说明受欢迎的课外活动）
We can learn a lot from these after-class activities．We are able to enrich our lives and get more new knowledge．（高分句型一）Besides，we can make more new friends．And these after-class activities can free us from the heavy work of study．（参加课外活动的益处）
In my opinion，we'd better choose the activities that interest us．（高分句型二）They will not only make our school life colorful，but also improve our learning．（我的建议）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．