Question

1．亲爱的同学们，三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，你们即将离开熟悉的母校和三年来朝夕相处并给予你们无尽关爱和帮助的老师们．请根据下面表格的内容，谈谈你熟悉的英语老师．
My English Teacher

Name	Ms．Li
Age	35
Looks	tall，beautiful，long curly hair
Hobbies	reading，singing，dancing，playing sports
Character（性格）	patient，friendly，warm-hearted
My comment（评价）	a good teacher，a friend，a mother

要求：（1）文中不能出现真实学校和老师真实姓名．
（2）语言要通顺，表达要正确．
（3）文章要求包含表格中的所有提示．
（4）词数不少于60个英语单词．
（5）文章开头已给出，不计入词数．
I have met many excellent teachers in junior school．One of them is my English teacher．Her name is Ms．Li．She is about thirty-five years old．She is not only tall but also beautiful．She has long curly hair Ms．Li also has a lot of hobbies，such as reading，singing，dancing，playing sports．She is very patient with us．We all think she is a friendly and warm-hearted teacher．Ms．Li is a good teacher．She is like a friend of ours．And sometime she is also like our mother．We all love her．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文，初中生活即将结束，介绍最喜欢的一位英语老师，其中写作要点包括：1．姓名（已给出）、年龄、外貌．2．爱好和性格．3．你对李老师的评价．因为是描述现在最熟悉最喜欢的英语老师，因此这篇短文用一般现在时态就可以．

解答 I have met many excellent teachers in junior school．One of them is my English teacher．Her name is Ms．Li． She is about thirty-five years old．She is not only tall but also beautiful．She has long curly hair． Ms．Li also has a lot of hobbies，such as reading，singing，dancing，playing sports．She is very patient with us．We all think she is a friendly and warm-hearted teacher．Ms．Li is a good teacher．She is like a friend of ours．And sometime she is also like our mother．We all love her．

点评 图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，显得简洁明了，正被越来越多的各级各类英语考试所采用．提纲图表式作文属于控制性写作的范畴．它控制性强，便于评分．应仔细分析图表，引证典型数据并按提纲要求进行取材与构思．