Question

20．同学们，我们身边有很多助人为乐的同学，他们的事例值得我们学习．请根据下面表格信息给学校英文报写一篇短文，谈谈身边的好人好事，号召大家向他们学习．

Who they are	What they usually do to help others
Liu Na	make our school beautiful （clean …）
Zhang Hua	help other students with their students…
Wu Tong	Help the people in trouble （cheer others up …）
…	…

要求：（1）参考表格信 息，可适当发挥；
      （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整．
      （3）文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
      （4）词数：60-80词．（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Editor，
In our school，some students are always thinking more of others and are ready to help them．I'm moved deeply．Here is what they usually do．
Liu Na is a very good student．
She often picks up rubbish and cleans the classroom to make our school more beautiful．Zhang Hua studies well．So she often helps other students with their studies．We all like her．Wu Tong is outgoing．He likes cheering others up．If we are sad，he always talks with us and tries to make us happy．He is also helpful．He likes helping people who are in trouble．He is very popular in our school．
I hope everyone can learn from them and do something for others．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容为根据表格信息给学校英文报写一篇短文，谈谈身边的好人好事，号召大家向他们学习．时态为一般现在时．人称为第三人称单数和第一人称．时态为一般现在时．写作要点包括：1．介绍Liu Na 的好人好事；2．介绍Zhang Hua的好人好事；3．介绍Wu Tong 的好人好事．常用的重点句型和短语：pick up，help…with…，cheer…up，try to do sth．等．

解答 Dear Editor，
In our school，some students are always thinking more of others and are ready to help them．I'm moved deeply．Here is what they usually do．
Liu Na is a very good student．She often picks up rubbish and cleans the classroom to make our school more beautiful．Zhang Hua studies well．So she often helps other students with their studies．We all like her．Wu Tong is outgoing．He likes cheering others up．If we are sad，he always talks with us and tries to make us happy．He is also helpful．He likes helping people who are in trouble．He is very popular in our school．
I hope everyone can learn from them and do something for others．

点评 本图表作文是结合表格内容进行写作．图表类作文表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．写作前要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的信息，明确要点；在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．