Question

1．My Plan for the Coming School Year
提示：难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以"My Plan for the Coming School Year"为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一学年内的打算．
要求：
1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个．
2．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3．短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇以My Plan for the Coming School Year为题目的作文，主要围绕新学年的学习计划展开写作，作文中要以一般将来时为主．作文要有适当发挥，应用词汇和语法结构要正确； 上下文要连贯以及语言要得体．还要注意拼写和标点符号．

解答 New year school is coming．All things have changed，but one thing have never been forgotten，which is studying．Next term，I will go to the senior school．So I must do well in the entrance exam of senior school．As these reasons，I plan a design for my study．
First，I will never waste my time again．You know Franklin said，"Never leave that until tomorrow，which you can do today．"．I will do it as these words of Franklin．Second，I will ask more questions which is a puzzle for me．Because of these things can let me understand all of knowledge in book very well．Third，I will do more exercises．Such as，English，Maths，Chinese and so on．
In a word，time is important，we should cherish the time．So action is only one thing I can do!

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．