Question

【题目】根据要求完成大作文，词数：60—80词。（共15分）

反思可以使人成长进步，为未来做好计划可以铸就成功，初中的生活即将结束，新的高中学习将要到来。请你用英语记录下一两件让你感动或遗憾的事，同时为你的生活做一点设计。

Answer 1

【答案】

During May Day holiday, I went to Ningbo by train. On the train there was a disabled little boy who had one leg. But he offered his seat to an old lady. The thing touched my heart a lot. This little boy's action made people around feel very warm. I think I will learn from the boy. I will help the people who need my help. If everyone can do that, the world will be a better and happier place.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求用英语记录下一两件让你感动或遗憾的事，同时为你的生活做一点设计。写作要求已经列出，故要完成写作任务，务必把事件表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如：But he offered his seat to an old lady. The thing touched my heart a lot. there be句式以及定语从句的应用更使得短文表述更准确，如On the train there was a disable little boy who had one leg.总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。