Question

14．电脑变得越来越普及，现在很多学生都有电脑．电脑的功能越来越多，它对人的帮助很多，但在电脑上花很多的时间一定对学生的学习造成影响．请根据表格提示和你自己对电脑的见解．

Advantages（优点）	听音乐，玩游戏，拍照 发邮件，-----
Disadvantages（缺点）	影响学习，引起眼睛酸痛 对健康有害-------
你的观点-------

以Computer为题写一篇短文．
要求：1．文章内容符合题意
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名、地名
3．字数60词以上
Computer
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
So ①playing too much on the computer②is bad for their health and study所以玩太多电脑对他们的健康和学习不利．
①动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数．
②be bad for 对…不利
【高分句型二】
①In my opinion，②whether it is good to use the computer depends on ourselves依我看来，使用电脑是否有益取决于我们自己．
①in one's opinion以某人看来．
②从句作为主语，谓语动词用单数．

解答 Computer
As is known to all of us，computer is playing a more and more important role in our daily life．
Computer brings many advantages to us．First，We can listen to music，take photos and play games．Second，we can keep in touch with each other by sending e-mails．Third，we can learn a lot of knowledge from the computer．What's more，we can have lessons on the computer（优点）
However，every coin has two sides．Some students spend lots of time playing computer games and lost themselves in the games．As a result，they fail to pass the exam and have a poor eyesight．So playing too much on the computer is bad for their health and study【高分句型一】．（缺点）
  In my opinion，whether it is good to use the computer depends on ourselves．【高分句型二】We can spare some time to search the important information online．When we are tired，the music and films on the computer can also make us relaxed．It's up to you，my friends？（我的观点）

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．