Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是Annie，你的笔友Mary发邮件问起你的家乡、学校生活等情况，请你用英语回一封邮件告之。

内容包括以下几个要点：

家乡	现代化城市，离上海不远。以美味的食物闻名全国，是个居住的好地方。
学校	位于城市的西南部，干净、美丽。有图书馆、阅览室、电脑房……
班级	教室在三楼。班上同学很友好，乐于助人……（举一例）
学习	勤奋，……（补充1点）
爱好	喜爱户外活动，……（补充1点）

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．邮件的开头、结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数；

3．邮件须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

4. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Mary,

Thanks for your last e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my home town, my school and my life here.

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I love my hometown and enjoy my school life.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Annie

Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown Jingjiangis a modern city, and it’s not far away from Shanghai. It’s famous for its nice food all over China. I think it’s a good place to live.

My school is in the south-east of our city. It’s clean and beautiful. We have a big library, a reading-room, two music rooms ,one art room and two computer rooms. We also have a big playground.

My classroom is on the third floor. My classmates are very friendly and helpful. When we have problems, we often help each other.

I work hard on all my subjects, but I’m not good at Chinese. I need to read more and speak more.

I like outdoor activities. My favoutite outdoor activity is camping, because I like being outside, near beautiful lakes and hills.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。

写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，My classmates are very friendly and helpful. When we have problems, we often help each other；My favoutite outdoor activity is camping, because I like being outside, near beautiful lakes and hills.为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。