Question

假如你叫李明，前不久，你和来自英国的一位中学生Allen一起讨论另一个话题：the ways to learn English better。请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教师Mr Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。

注意：1、开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数。

????? 2、所写内容必须包括表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。

????? 3、词数80左右。

His ideas	Your ideas
Reading English newspapers???	1.leaning English grammar well
Talking with friends	2……
Seeing English films	3…….

Mr Nunan,

??? Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. _________________________________________________________________

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??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours sincerely,

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr Nunan,

Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn‘t a bad way.

I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Mei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求向外籍教师介绍Allen和你的学英语的观点。主要时态用到一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。

【亮点说明】这篇短文结构非常清楚，第一段阐述了Allen的观点，第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来，显得非常自然。同时在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重复，增加了语言的多样化。的衔接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑，读来一气呵成。

考点：话题作文。