Question

【题目】亲爱的同学们, 健康是一个人的首要财富。拥有健康的身体, 才能保证良好的学习状态。有些同学由于平时不注意照顾自己的身体, 而导致健康出现了一些问题。想要拥有健康的身体, 需要大家在日常生活中多加注意。请你结合自身的经历谈谈如何保持身体健康。内容须包含以下要点：

要求: 1. 词数80词左右；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】Health is the most precious treasure in our lives. It is based on what we can do, such as studying, working and so on.

I used to pay little attention to my health. I ate lots of junk food and seldom took exercise. As a result, I was in poor health and got tired easily. So I decided to change my lifestyle. After giving up junk food and playing more sports, I become healthier and healthier.

Then how can we stay healthy?First, doing sports is necessary. We can take part in outdoor activities in our free time. Second, we should eat meals on time, and eat more healthy food, such as apples, vegetables but less junk food. Besides, keeping a good mood and having enough sleep are also important. I hope all of us can be healthy.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真说读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时及一般过去时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致及时间状语与时态的一致问题。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。