Question

10．假如你是汤姆，你刚收到好友彼得的一封信．请先读完这封信，了解他的问题困惑，然后给他写一封回信，告诉他问题所在并提出建议．要求：不少于60词，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数，可适当发挥．
提示词：Why don't you…？You could/should…
Dear Tom，
I'm unhappy recently．I have too much pressure from school．I often have a headache and a cold．I think I'm too shy．I have few friends at school．I don't know what to do．Can you give me some advice？
Yours
PeterDear Peter，
I'm glad to  receive your letter．I think you should learn to relax．
Firstly，we should face the pressure properly，we can't be afraid of them and try our best todo with them．Secondly，make more friends，if you have problems you can talk with them，and during the talking，we may get some suggestions and solutions．Finally，trust ourselves．We should believe ourselves，we can deal with any trouble by ourselves．
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一   
we can't be afraid of them and try our best to do with them我们不能害怕他们，尽我们最大的努力去解决他们．try one's best to do sth．尽某人最大努力做某事．
高分句型二
if you have problems you can talk with them．如果你有问题可以和他们谈谈．这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果…．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm glad to  receive your letter．I think you should learn to relax．
Firstly，we should face the pressure properly，so we can't be afraid of them and try our best to do with them．【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】【要点一，正确面对压力】Secondly，make more friends，if you have problems you can talk with them【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】，and during the talking，we may get some suggestions and solutions【要点二，多交朋友】．Finally，trust ourselves．We should believe ourselves，we can deal with any trouble by ourselves．【要点三，自信】
Yours，
Tom．

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．