Question

5．幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情．
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，字迹工整，80-100词．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In fact，happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it．
句中"if you put your heart into it"为条件状语从句，句中"in fact"意为"事实上"．这句话意为：事实上，如果你用心感受，幸福就在你身边．
高分句型二：
Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．
句中"Whenever I am in trouble"为时间状语从句，"be in trouble"意为"有困难"．这句话意为：无论任何时候我有困难，我都能感受到父母的爱．

解答 My happiness
Happiness is important in our life．In fact，happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it．【高分句型一】（点明主旨）
I will never forget one thing．Once，I had a bad mark at a math test．I was shy and afraid to meet my parents．But when I got back home late，my parents knew what happened，they said to me："It doesn't matter，my child．Remember we'll be always with you when you need help．We believe you can be better next time．Never give up!"I was moved andmade up my mind to work harder and harder．（回忆事情）
I feel happy．Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．【高分句型二】I want to be a good child for my parents．（升华主题）

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