Question

13．下面是全球最年轻的亿万富翁，被称为"盖茨第二"的马克•扎克伯格（Mark）的个人简历，请根据表格内容，为英文杂志写一篇文章，要求如下：
1）根据表格内容，介绍其履历，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译．
2）谈谈你对成功的看法．
3）词数80-100

马克•扎克伯格 Mark Elliot Zuckerberg	1984年出生于美国．
	10岁的时候他得到了第一台电脑，从此将大把的时间都花在了上面．
	高中时，他为学校设计了一款MP3．
	在读大学期间，扎克伯格就和两位室友一起，建立了一个名为facebook的社交网站．
	对成功的看法：hard-working，never give up …

参考词汇：be born；high school；design；university；set up；roommate
社交网站 social network site
Mark Elliot Zuckerberg，the youngest billionaire in the world，was regarded as the second Bill Gates．Do you want to know something about him？I'd like to share his story with you．Mark was born in 1982 in America．He was very interested in computer when he was only a little boy．At the age of ten，Mark got his first computer．He spent plenty of time on the computer from then on．When he was a student in high school，he designed an MP3 for his school．During his time in the university，he set up a social network site called facebook with two of his roommates．
As for my opinion of success，I think anyone who wants to be successful must be hard-working．Don't give up whenever you have difficulties．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍马克•扎克伯格并谈谈你对成功的看法．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.1984年出生于美国．
2.10岁的时候他得到了第一台电脑，从此将大把的时间都花在了上面．
3．高中时，他为学校设计了一款MP3．
5．在读大学期间，扎克伯格就和两位室友一起，建立了一个名为facebook的社交网站．
6．对成功的看法：hard-working，never give up …
常用到的重点短语：
be born 出生
be interested in 对…感兴趣
at the age of …在…岁的时候
spend+时间+on sth 花时间做某事
give up 放弃
【高分句型】
1．①During his time in the university，he②set up a social network site③called facebook with two of his roommates．
①during表示在…期间．
②set up建立
③过去分词短语做后置定语，修饰network site．
2．①As for my opinion of success，I think②anyone ③who wants to be successful must be hard-working．
①As for my opinion of success至于我对成功地看法
②think后省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
③who作为关系词的定语从句，who作为从句的主语，修饰先行词anyone．
3．Don't ①give up ②whenever you have difficulties．
①give up 放弃
②whenever无论什么时候，引导的让步状语从句

解答 Mark Elliot Zuckerberg，the youngest billionaire in the world，was regarded as the second Bill Gates．Do you want to know something about him？I'd like to share his story with you．Mark was born in 1984 in America．（1984年出生于美国）He was very interested in computer when he was only a little boy．At the age of ten，Mark got his first computer．He spent plenty of time on the computer from then on．（10岁的时候他得到了第一台电脑，从此将大把的时间都花在了上面）When he was a student in high school，he designed an MP3 for his school．（高中时，他为学校设计了一款MP3． ）During his time in the university，he set up a social network site called facebook with two of his roommates．【高分句型】（在读大学期间，扎克伯格就和两位室友一起，建立了一个名为facebook的社交网站）
As for my opinion of success，I think anyone who wants to be successful must be hard-working．【高分句型】Don't give up whenever you have difficulties．【高分句型】（对成功的看法）

点评 本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，主要是介绍马克的个人简历，写作时应注意主要使用单数第三人称形式和一般过去时，内容包括马克的出生地，马克在10岁，高中和大学期间所做的事，以及个人对马克成功的看法，写作时应注意时间的先后性和语言的准确性．