Question

【题目】根据要求完成大作文。

现在许多人在讨论“中国梦”（the Chinese dream），我们的祖国如何早日梦想成真，

这需要我们每个中国人的努力，因为我们每个人的小梦想是中国梦的一部分。

请以My Dream为题，谈谈你的梦想。

提示：1、你的梦想是什么？2、你为什么有这样的梦想？ 3、你打算怎样

实现你的梦想？

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream

Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.

Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.

I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第一人称。

写作亮点：这篇文章主要是以梦想为主题。文中使用了do their best、at the same time、thanks to 、from now on等较高级的短语和词汇，而且还使用了They spend most time on their students. it is not easy to make my dream come true等句型为文章增色不少。