Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据提示，发挥想象，以“My Dream Home”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

内容包括以下要点：

1. 一个靠近湖边的新房子，有三层。有时在湖上划船。房子周围有许多花和树。

2. 远离市中心，空气新鲜。房子前面有个大花园，早晨可以听到鸟语，闻到花香。

3. 在顶楼有一个家庭影院。周末时想邀请朋友们来看电影。

4. 你的感想…….(适当发挥)

要求：1．语句通顺、语言规范。 2．书写工整、标点符号正确。3. 开头已给，不计词数。

My Dream Home

Hello , everyone! Today I want to tell you about my dream home.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream home

Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you about my dream home.

My dream home is a new house near a lake. It has three floors. Sometimes I row a boat on the lake.There are many flowers and trees around the house.

It is far away from the city center, so the air here is fresh. There is a big garden in front of my dream home. In the morning I can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers.

There’s a home cinema on the top floor. At weekends I would like to invite my friends to come and watch wonderful films.

It’s a wonderful place to live. It’s lucky enough for me to live in a house like this.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己梦想中的家，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如It is far away from the city center, so the air here is fresh. There is a big garden in front of my dream home.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。