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【题目】书面表达

假设你住在阳光社区，并且是社区负责人之一。你想写一则通知，告诉居民你们组织了一个互助俱乐部，想帮助那些需要帮助的人。依据以下信息，完成短文，做适当补充，开头和结尾已给出。

提示:1.我们俱乐部每周六下午召开一次会议;2.如果你身体不舒服，我们这儿有医生护士;3.如果你家里的电器坏了.我们这儿有工程师;4如果你的孩子做作业有问题，我们这儿有大学生……

Dear all，

I am Simon, one of the leaders of our Sunshine community centre.

Come on, everybody! We are here waiting for you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear all,

I am Simon, one of the leaders of our Sunshine community centre.

We usually have a "helping hands" meeting on Saturday afternoon. If you have come problems, you can come to us and let us know. Then we can give you some help.

If you are not feeling well these days, we have some good doctors and nurses here and they will make you feel well again. Is your washing machine or TV broken? Don't worry. Our engineers are ready to help. When your children have problems with their homework, the college students will help them. Also, if you don't know how to design your new home, the artists here will give you some good ideas.

Come on, everybody! We are here waiting for you.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者写一则通知，告诉居民你们组织了一个互助俱乐部，想帮助那些需要帮助的人。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如If you are not feeling well these days, we have some good doctors and nurses here and they will make you feel well again. When your children have problems with their homework, the college students will help them. Also, if you don't know how to design your new home, the artists here will give you some good ideas.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。