Question

【题目】你最喜欢哪类电视节目？你最喜欢的电视节目又是哪个？你喜欢它哪些方面？你能从中收获些什么？假期快到了，你打算在假期如何安排时间观看这个节目并谈谈你的理由。请以My favorite TV show为题写一篇不少于60字的作文。要求字迹工整，调理清晰。

Answer 1

【答案】

My Favorite TV Program

My favorite TV program is "Animal World". We can watch the program every Sunday evening. The program tells us the story of animal life. We can learn the animals' habits and their natural surroundings.

In Shanghai Zoo, there are also many animals. But in the program we can see more animals. It gives me a chance to learn about the other creatures. Animals are our friends. It is wrong to kill them for food. We must do our best to protect them. I hope I can do something for the wild animals.In summer vacation I’m going to watch it every Sunday evening and learn more about animals.

【解析】

试题分析：首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般现在时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：My favorite TV program，the story of animal life，the animals' habits and their natural surroundings，a chance to learn about the other creatures，kill them for food，do our best to protect them，learn more about animals等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理。