Question

【题目】书面表达

随着电子商务的发展，网上购物已经越来越流行了，请根据下列提示词，描述一下你第一次网购的经历。

要点与参考词汇：want to buy a book, excited, pay money, wait for a long time, broken , sad, call the seller, change, at last , learn be honest, in online shopping

写作要求：1. 内容必须包括上面提示的要点。（尽可能多地应有以上包括要点的词汇，并可以适当发挥）

2. 文章结构合理，条理清晰，语句连贯、行文流畅。

3. 词数：80左右。短文开头已给出，你可以选择使用，或者自己从头开始写。（如选用开头，请接着从下一行开始写，开头不计入总词数。如不选用开头，请空两行，自己从头开始写）

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

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Answer 1

【答案】

It is really convenient to shop online because of the development of the e-business. I still remember the experience that I shopped on taobao for the first time.

I could find the book that I wanted in the bookstore. So I decided to buy a book online. I felt a little excited because it was my first time. After paying money online, I waited for a long time.

When the book arrived, it was broken. I felt really angry and called the seller. The seller agreed to change another book for me. I learn that being honest is important in online shopping. At last I got the new book and felt happy. (84 words)

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。