Question

【题目】根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入总词数。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Jim要来北京参加交换生活动。他写邮件向你了解中国的礼仪，你们通常在家和学校怎么做，以及与人融洽相处最重要的是什么。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：shake hands，eat first，quite，respect，friendly

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi !Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing.In China, we are supposed to shake hands when we meet someone for the first time. And we are not supposed to eat first when older people are at the table.

For students, it is necessary to be polite to others. At home, we never start talking until our parents finish their words. At school, greeting teachers and schoolmates is considered polite behavior. We always stand up when we talk to our teachers. Besides, when we are in public places like museums or libraries, it’s important to keep quiet.

In a word, showing enough respect for others is the secret to getting along with people both in China and in other countries.

I hope you’ll enjoy yourself in Beijing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇书信作文。假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Jim要来北京参加交换生活动。他写邮件向你了解中国的礼仪，要求根据中文和英文提示，给他写一封回信。首先要注意邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。在动笔写作之前，要认真审题，对来信中的问题要一一都作出回答；根据提示要点和内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅；同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
经典句：In a word, showing enough respect for others is the secret to getting along with people both in China and in other countries.使用in a word来连接最后的总结。在总结句中用showing enough respects for others动名词短语作主语，后面使用了both and来连接连个介词短语。