Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李明，请你给Mr. Know 写一封信，关于你们学校的规矩太多了，不允许你们在教室吃东西，不允许你们在过道疯打，在学校必须穿校服等等，你认为，你们应该被允许做某些事情，并希望得到他的帮助。

要求:

1. 要点齐备，可以适当发挥；

2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear Mr. Know,

We have too many rules in our school.

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Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Know,

We have too many rules in our school. For example, we aren’t allowed to eat anything in class or run around in the hallways. We should wear our school uniform at school and we should go to school on time and never be late. We are required to keep the classroom clean and quiet. We can't drink or sleep in class. We must do our homework on time, too. I think these rules are good for our study and school life. Some students don't like wearing school uniforms all the time because it's boring. It's ok with me. However, we should be allowed to have our own ideas.

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用信息提示写作的话题作文。要求根据信息提示，以学校的规章制度为话题，写一篇短文。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。可以主动语态、被动语态并用。

写作亮点：本文要点明确，语言精练。层次分明。不同要点英语使用的句式也不一样。语言的表述符合语法的结构，两个被动语态的句子使用的也很得体：We aren’t allowed to eat anything in class or run around in the hallways. We should be allowed to have our own ideas.