Question

12．在我们的生活中，总会遇到许多困难或不如意的事情，如生活上的、学习上的、情感上的…我们要有信心去克服它，不要轻言放弃！请你以"Never Give Up"为题写一篇短文，让我们分享你的经历、感受或想法．字数：80词左右．
温馨提示：（1）短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．
（2）这些单词也许对你有帮助：difficulty，unhappy，deal with，confident
Never Give Up
Difficulties may come with the happiness in our life．I did well in my study all the time before I began to study physics．I thought physics was so difficult and boring that I had so many problems to learn it well．I nearly wanted to give it up．
I talked about my problems to my teachers．He gave me some advice to improve my study．I also got some help from my classmates after class．I rebuilt my confidence by chatting with my parents，reading，enjoying the music and doing sports．I was not afraid of physics any more and made great progress after that．
Never give up，believe yourself that you can overcome the probles．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈生活中遇到的困难或不如意的事情．时态主要为一般现过去．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．事情经历
2．感受想法．
常用到的重点短语：
do well in 擅长…
so…that 如此…以至于
give up 放弃
talk about 谈论
chat with sb与某人聊天
be afraid of  害怕…
make progress 取得进步

高分句型：
I thought ①physics was ②so difficult and boring that I had so many problems to learn it well．
①省略了引导词that 的宾语从句．
②so…that…如此…以至于，中间加上形容词或副词，so 是副词，在这里修饰形容词difficult and boring．that引导结果状语从句．
①Never give up，believe yourself ②that you can overcome the probles．
①祈使句的运用．
②that引导的宾语从句，作为believe的宾语．

解答 Never Give Up
Difficulties may come with the happiness in our life．I did well in my study all the time before I began to study physics．I thought physics was so difficult and boring that I had so many problems to learn it well．（高分句型）I nearly wanted to give it up．
I talked about my problems to my teachers．He gave me some advice to improve my study．I also got some help from my classmates after class．I rebuilt my confidence by chatting with my parents，reading，enjoying the music and doing sports．I was not afraid of physics any more and made great progress after that．（事情的经过）
Never give up，believe yourself that you can overcome the probles．（高分句型）（感想）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．