Question

某学校提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇100词左右的英语发言稿。内容包括：

家长接送的优点和缺点	可以节约学生的时间；
确保安全，特别是在天气恶劣时；
使城市更拥堵、加剧污染。
走路去上学的优点	走路有利于健康；
和同学、朋友结伴上学会……；
……。（自拟至少一条）
你的观点	赞同“走路去上学”；
同时要注意……。

要求：100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Boys and girls,

Nowadays more and more parents drive their children to school….

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Boys and girls,

Nowadays more and more parents drive their children to school. It can save the students’ time. And parents want to make sure the students are safe, especially when the weather is terrible. However, our city is more and more crowded and polluted.

I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for our health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with our classmates or friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school and it will let them have more spare time. (或：There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now.)

I hope more and more students will go to school on foot. And of course, we must follow the traffic rules at the same time. Thank you for your attention!

【解析】

     试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照该学校的倡议并结合表格中的内容完成这篇发言稿，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含父母开车送学生上学的优缺点、走路去上学的优点、并表达出你自己的观点等，语言要诚恳、有说服力，表达出自己的希望。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一、三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的衔接和过度，要符合句子间的逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

     这篇短文系统、全面地阐明了自己对于家长开车送孩子上学和步行上学的利弊，表达出了自己的最终倡议，文中包含了表格中的基本信息，并发挥了适当的想象。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含形容词比较级和非谓语动词的准确使用为文章增色不少.如it’s fun to walk together with our classmates or friends，is more and more crowded and polluted，going to school on foot is good for us，something interesting，文中句与句和段与段的衔接和过度更加自然，如First of all, Next, What’s more,学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：表格作文。