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下面是学校留言板上的两则信息,根据其内容,请你以William的名义,针对其中一位同学遇到的问题,提出你的建议。要求:1.任选其中一则信息进行回复,并注意补全文首的称呼;2.建议合理,文意通顺;3.词数:70左右。

Dear ________,

_____________________________________________

_____________________________________________

William

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Dear Henry,

  If your mom thinks the clothes you like are not good for you, you’d better not change her mind.But you should have a say in what you wear.Share your ideas with her when you go shopping.Try this,“I like this T-shirt because they’re comfortable,”or“I don’t like gray things”Focus on the clothes, not your mom’s taste.With a little time and effort, you’ll be able to get what you want.

William

Dear Sally,

  Don’t get anger too soon.Think twice.Your friend might be careless.Something important to you may not be the same to her.Did she tell other people because she didn’t realized that she was doing something wrong?Tell her how you feel and ask her why she told others about your secrets.If she knew her actions would hurt you, it’s time to put an end to your friendship.

William

  评分标准:根据短文所属档次,按以下五档给分:

  A档:(10~9分)叙述清楚切题,内容充实,表达清楚,行文连贯,语言无误,书写规范,符合词数要求。

  B档:(8~7分)叙述清楚切题,内容充实,表达较清楚,行文比较连贯,语言错误较少,书写较规范,少于或超过规定的词数10%以上。

  C档:(6~5分)叙述较清楚切题,内容较充实,表达较清楚,行文比较连贯,语言错误较多,书写不规范。

  D档:(4~3分)语言错误多,行文不连贯,主题不突出,书写不规范。

  E档:(2~0分)仅写出几个单词,无完整的句子可读。


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     下面是学校留言板上的两则信息,根据其内容,请你以William的名义,针对其中一位同学遇到
的问题,提出你的建议。
     要求:
     1. 任选其中一则信息进行回复,并注意补全文首的称呼;
     2. 建议合理,文意通顺;
     3. 词数:70左右。
     My mom always buys me clothes
I don't like! But I usually don't tell her.
I'm worried I'll hurt her feelings.
Sometimes I tell her what I want to
wear. But what she buys is still what
she wants me to wear. What should I do? 
                                                  Henry
     Xiao Fei used to be my best friend.
We told each other everything. But a
few weeks ago, I found that she was
telling all my secrets to others. I am so
hurt. I thought Xiao Fei was my friend!
What should I do?
                                                 Sally
Dear _______,
     ________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                                                                       William

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