Question

书面表达

假入你是凯特，非常喜欢音乐，大部分空闲时间都花在音乐上面。请你以 I like music 为题，写一篇70词左右的短文。要求至少写出你喜欢音乐的三个原因。

I like music very much . I spend most of my free time on music.                           

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

                                                                                    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I like music very much . I spend most of my free time on music. When I am free, I always listen to my MP4 player or play the piano. I began to play the piano when I was 5 years old. I like music because it can make me feel relaxed and happy. And I have also made a lot of friends because of music. My friends and I often talk about different kinds of music together. What’s more, I can learn a lot when I enjoy music. For example, I can know a country’s tradition by listening to music.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意描述自己喜欢音乐的三点原因。结合内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称是单数第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：命题作文的写作

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。