Question

【题目】（题文）书面表达

请看下面四幅图及提示，对李雷和王英的不同学习方法，写一篇120词左右的短文，谈谈自己的看法。要求意思连贯，符合逻辑，短文的开头已给出，请接着往下写。

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Li Lei and Wang Ying are two middle school students. They both work hard but they have different learning ways.

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Answer 1

【答案】Li Lei and Wang Ying are two middle school students. They both work hard but they have different learning ways.

Li Lei is often tired in class. He usually doesn't listen to the teacher. As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes. So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep.

However, Wang Ying listens carefully and tries to catch what the teacher says in class. Because of this, she goes to bed early and she learns better than Li Lei.

In my opinion, Wang Ying learns better in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning way.

【解析】

试题这是一篇材料作文，结合所给写作信息，把 “李雷和王英的不同学习方法”有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文应以一般现在时态为主，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了both，but , in class, listen to，as a result, stay up late，however,，tries to，in my opinion, enjoy oneself，so等词或固定短语，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了定语从句、比较状语从句等丰富的句型，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。