Question

现在环境变得越来越差。环境问题影响着人们的工作，学习，生活。而我们的工作，生活，生产又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境?请以“How to protect/save our environment/world?”为题写一篇短文。

提示：1．水污染和大气污染越来越严重

2．森林被破坏和砍伐

3．白色垃圾随处可见

要求：1．如何改善/保护环境？至少3～4个方面，80词左右。

2．文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to protect our environment?

The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution. And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, it's time for us to protect our environment. Firstly, we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. Don't use plastic bags. Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them. We hope our environment is more and more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，所给要点条理清晰，要求明确，内容贴近社会热点，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文能够根据写作提示，较好地把与写作相关的内容进行归纳整合，文章内容覆盖所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用句式和短语，如：more and more、because of、died of、In order to、it's time for sb to do、throw away、as long as possible stop --- cutting等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。