Question

7．在你取得进步和成功的三年路程里，你的父母、老师、同学肯定曾给予你很大的帮助．毕业在即，你最想感谢的人是谁？请你参考下图，写一篇题为"The person I want to Thank Most!"的短文，放入自己的毕业纪念册．
要求：
（1）句中不能出现真实的人名和校名； （2）词数为80-100；（3）开头以给出，不计入总词数．

The Person I Want to Thank Most
In my junior school life，a lot of people have helped me．I thank them very much．But the person I want to thank most ismy English teacher--Ms Lee．
My English teacher Ms Lee is very kind and easygoing．She helps me alot．She takes good care of us．She often helps me with my English．When I am in trouble，she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice．I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English．With her help，I made great progress in English and became increasingly interested in it．
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me．I'll try my best to live up to her expectations．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"The person I want to Thank Most!"为题说说你最想感谢的人．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．最想感谢的人是谁；
2．性格；
3．怎样帮助你的？
4．感受和打算．
常用到的重点短语：
take care of 照顾
help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
in trouble 处于困境
encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
cheer up 使振奋
with one's help 在某人的帮助下
make progress 取得进步
be interested in 对…感兴趣
try one's best to do sth 尽力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①When I am in trouble，she always ②encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice．
①when引导的时间状语从句，in trouble 处于困境
②encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事

2．I still remember①that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset she ②cheered me up and told me some good ways ③to improve my English．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为remember的宾语．
②cheer up 使振奋
③动词不定式作为目的状语．
3．I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me
that作为关系词的定语从句，that作为从句的宾语．修饰先行词all．

解答 The Person I Want to Thank Most
In my junior school life，a lot of people have helped me．I thank them very much．But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher--Ms Lee．（最想感谢的人是谁）
   My English teacher Ms Lee is very kind and easygoing．（性格）She helps me a lot．She takes good care of us．She often helps me with my English．When I am in trouble，she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice．【高分句型】I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English．【高分句型】With her help，I made great progress in English and became increasingly interested in it．（怎样帮助你的，举例说明）
   I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me．【高分句型】I'll try my best to live up to her expectations．（感受和打算）

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，写自己最想感谢的人，学生比较有话说，但是要注意提示要点一定写全．同时还要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．