Question

1．假如你是王红，你的美国笔友Rose给你发来email，想在暑假到天津参观旅游．请你根据下表提示，为Rose制定一份"天津一日游"计划，并发email给她，介绍相关内容．

时间	活动
上午	参观天津博物馆，了解天津历史
下午	登天塔（Tianjin TV Tower），参观动物园；
晚上	在美食街（the Food Street）吃晚饭，谈论各自的校园生活； 去滨江道Binjiang Road购物；

要求：1）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥．
2）词数：80～100个，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
3）书写工整占1分．
参考词汇：了解…历史；learn the history of
校园生活：school life

Address	@http://www．englishclub．com/
Subject：	One-day trip
Dear Rose I'm so glad to learn that you will come to Tianjin．I have planned a one-day trip for you．In the morning，I'm going to show you around the Tianjin Museum so you can learn the history of Tianjin． In the afternoon，we are going to climb the Tianjin TV Tower and then we'll go to the zoo．I think it'll be interesting to see those animals． I'm sure you'll enjoy Chinese food in the Food Street．And then we can have a talk about our school life when having dinner together．After that we're going to do some shopping in Binjiang Road． Are you pleased with my plan？I hope you will have a wonderful time in Tianjin． Looking forward to meeting you! Yours， Wang Hong

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是为Rose制定一份"天津一日游"计划，并发email给她．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1上午：参观天津博物馆，了解天津历史
2下午：登天塔，参观动物园；
3晚上：在美食街吃晚饭，谈论各自的校园生活；去滨江道购物；
常用到的重点短语：
be going to 打算
show sb around 带某人参观
be pleased with 对…满意
have a wonderful time 玩的开心
【高分句型】
1．In the morning，I'm going to①show you around the Tianjin Museum②so you can learn the history of Tianjin．
①show sb around 带某人参观
②so连词，表示所以，不能与because因为连用．
2．I think ①②it'll be interesting to see those animals．
①think 后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句
②it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
3．And then we can have a talk about our school life when having dinner together．
when having dinner together省略句，完整表达是when we have dinner together．

解答 Dear Rose，
I'm so glad to learn that you will come to Tianjin．I have planned a one-day trip for you．
In the morning，I'm going to show you around the Tianjin Museum so you can learn the history of Tianjin．【高分句型】（参观天津博物馆，了解天津历史）In the afternoon，we are going to climb the Tianjin TV Tower and then we'll go to the zoo．I think it'll be interesting to see those animals．【高分句型】（ 登天塔，参观动物园）I'm sure you'll enjoy Chinese food in the Food Street．And then we can have a talk about our school life when having dinner together．【高分句型】After that we're going to do some shopping in Binjiang Road．（在美食街吃晚饭，谈论各自的校园生活；去滨江道购物）
Are you pleased with my plan？I hope you will have a wonderful time in Tianjin．
Looking forward to meeting you!
                                                                    Yours，
                                                                    Wang Hong

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．