Question

9．Time isfor businessmen；
Time isfor doctors；
Time is soto everyone，it will never．
As for me．
一首"Where is the time？"又一次引发了人们对时间的感慨，作为即将参加中考的你，将怎样充分利用时间，为初中三年画上一个圆满的句号．请从以下几个方面，以"Treasure every minute"为题，写一篇不少于100词的短文．（文章里不能出现真实校名和人名）
（1）时间的重要性        
（2）你身边浪费时间的现象
（3）你的时间去哪儿了   
（4）你将怎样充分利用余下的时间？
Treasure every minute
People often say，"Time is money，"But in fact time is more valuable than money．If money is spent，we can earn it back．However，if time is lost，it will never return．This is the reason why we must value time．The time we have is limited．But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time．They spend their time chatting，smoking or drinking．They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life．As for me，I spend most of my time doing homework．In a word，every minute is precious，we should make full use of our time．Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"Treasure every minute"为题谈谈时间的重要性以及怎样充分利用时间．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）时间的重要性        
（2）你身边浪费时间的现象
（3）你的时间去哪儿了   
（4）你将怎样充分利用余下的时间？

常用到的重点短语：
in fact事实上
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
in a word 总之
make use of 利用

【高分句型】
1．①However，②if time③is lost，it will never return．
①however表转折，然而．
②if引导的条件状语从句，主将从现．
③is lost是一般现在时的被动语态．

2．①But ②there are a lot of people③who do not know the importance of time．
①but表转折，但是．
②there be表示有，谓语动词的单复数根据就近原则确定．
③who是关系词，做定语从句的主语不可省略，修饰先行词people．

解答 Treasure every minute
People often say，"Time is money，"But in fact time is more valuable than money．If money is spent，we can earn it back．However，if time is lost，it will never return．（时间的重要性 ）【高分句型】This is the reason why we must value time．The time we have is limited．But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time．【高分句型】They spend their time chatting，smoking or drinking．They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life．（浪费时间的现象）As for me，I spend most of my time doing homework．（我的时间去哪儿了）In a word，every minute is precious，we should make full use of our time．Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow．（怎样充分利用余下的时间）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．