Question

4．亲爱的同学们，中考过后将迎来愉快的暑假．你一定对旅行感兴趣吧？请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的旅行计划．（可适当发挥）
1．与父母乘火车去北京；
2．想浏览哪些风景名胜；
3．其他打算…
4．将会有何收获．
可能用到的词语：capital，symbol，the Great Wall，The Palace Museum，Tian'anmen，Square，Beijing Duck…
注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不给分．
Summer vacation is coming soon．I'm going to Beijing，the capital of China with my parents．We'll go there by train so that we can enjoy the scenery along the way．We'll visit the Great Wall first because it's symbol of our country．After that I'll go to Tian'anmen Square，the Palace Museum and so on．Of course，I must enjoy Beijing Duck．During the trip，I will take a lot of photos．
I believe I'll have a wonderful trip．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是介绍一下你的暑假旅行计划．时态主要为一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．与父母乘火车去北京；
2．想浏览哪些风景名胜；
3．其他打算…
4．将会有何收获．
常用到的重点短语：
be going to  打算…
and so on 等等
of course 当然
take photos照相
【高分句型】
1．We'll go there by train so that we can enjoy the scenery along the way．
so that引导的目的状语从句．
2．We'll visit the Great Wall first because it's symbol of our country．
because 引导的原因状语从句
3．I believe I'll have a wonderful trip．
 believe后省略了引导词that的宾语从句．

解答 Summer vacation is coming soon．I'm going to Beijing，the capital of China with my parents．We'll go there by train so that we can enjoy the scenery along the way【高分句型】（与父母乘火车去北京）．We'll visit the Great Wall first because it's symbol of our country．【高分句型】After that I'll go to Tian'anmen Square，the Palace Museum and so on．（浏览哪些风景名胜）Of course，I must enjoy Beijing Duck．During the trip，I will take a lot of photos．（其他打算）
    I believe I'll have a wonderful trip．【高分句型】（将会有何收获）

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．是要求介绍一下自己的暑假计划，时态比较单一，一般将来时，考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．