Question

9．初中三年的英语学习中，我们与北京阳光中学的同学成了朝夕相处的朋友，其中Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给我们留下了深刻的印象．请根据课本内容及下表提示，用英语写一篇题为"My Friend Daniel"的短文．

Daniel
Appearance		Likes
		Dislikes	sports
Personality	helpful--help an old woman cross the road kind--work at the Helping Hands Club  creative--create a TV programme …
What can you learn from him？

注意事项：
1．词数：80词左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3．文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥．
My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School．Hewears glasses．He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports．
Daniel is helpful and kind．Once he helped an old woman cross the road．He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club．He is such a creative boy that he created a TV programme for a competition．Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him．
Daniel is so great that we must learn from him．We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表给出信息的提纲作文．内容为根据课本所学内容及表格提示，用英语写一篇题为"My Friend Daniel"的短文．描述Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质．时态为一般现在时．人称为第三人称．写作要点包括：1．Daniel 的外貌描述；2．Daniel的喜好；3．Daniel的个性；4．从Daniel身上所学的．常用到的重点句型和短语：sb．spend some time （in） doing sth．某人在做某事上花费多长时间，such+a/an+adj+n，so…that，try one's best to do sth．等．

解答 My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School．He wears glasses．He has short black hair，small eyes and big mouth．
He likes playing computer games but dislikes doing sports．
Daniel is helpful and kind．Once he helped an old woman cross the road．He spends much of his spare time working at the Helping Hands Club．He is such a creative boy that he created a TV program for a competition．Daniel is also polite and everyone likes him．
Daniel is so great that we must learn from him．We will try our best to help each other and get along well with others to create a happy home for both you and me．

点评 这是一篇表格给出写作提纲的作文．考生在写作时表格内容要全部包括在内．并注意适当发挥．根据表格内容需从Daniel的外貌、喜好、个性及从他身上所学到的东西四个方面展开作文．作文时适当的使用常用结构及复合句，可使文章增添不少色彩．