Question

8．假如你是李华．正值平谷举办"桃花音乐节"之际．邀请你在北京城里某中学就读的好朋友-美国交换生Peter来平谷参观．请以"My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu"为话题．用英语写一篇短文．
简要介绍平谷，告诉他从北京如何来平谷，在平谷可以做的事，以及你的希望．
提示词语：peaches，scenic spots，（Jinhai Lake，Jingdong Big Cave，Jingdong Big Valley，etc．）
concerts，food
提示问题：●What's Pinggu famous for？
●How can he come to Pinggu？What can he do here？
●What's your hope？

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，要求以"My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu"为题写一篇短文．写作要点是简要介绍平谷，告诉交换生Peter从北京如何来平谷，在平谷可以做的事，以及李华的希望．人称主要为第二人称，时态主要为用一般现在时．要注意人称和动词的运用．
高分句型：
①It takes you about an hour and a half to get here．到这里需要花费你一个半小时．
句子考查句型：It takes sb some time to do sth，表示花费某人多长时间做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式短语，
an hour and a half 一个半小时，还可以说one and a half hours．
②I think you're sure to like it．我想你一定会喜欢它的．
I think 后面跟的是一个that引导宾语从句，这里省略了that，be  sure to do sth一定要做某事，后面跟的是to引导的不定式形式．

解答 My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu
  Pinggu is famous for its big peaches．There're many，many peach trees．In spring，you can see peach flowers everywhere．We call it"peach flower sea"．In Autumn，you can eat big and sweet peaches．（简要介绍平谷）
  Pinggu is not far from your school．You can take No．852or918 bus from Dongzhimen．It takes you about an hour and a half to get here（高分句型）．（如何来平谷）
 There are many famous scenic spots，such as Jinhai Lake，Jingdong Big Valley，etc．You can visit some of them if you have time．A concert is held every year in spring and then many popular music stars come．I think you're sure to like it．（高分句型）There are also much delicious local food．If you like，you can have a try．（在平谷可以做的事）
I hope you'll come soon and have a good time in my hometown．（祝愿和希望）

点评 本文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅．文中用到了很多短语，如：be famous for，far from，be sure to do，have a good time等等．我们在平时的学习中应加强写的训练，写作时要做到字迹工整，卷面整洁，语言流畅要把文中的要点写全，做到语句通顺，过渡自然连贯．