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书面表达(满分15分)

过马路闯红灯近年来已成为社会关注的热点话题，请结合下面的一则报道和图片。写篇英语小短文，词数在100字左右。短文应包含以下几个方面：

1. 简单描述图片内容；

2. 谈谈你对此类行为的感受或看法。

3. 提出解决此类问题的合理建议；

（参考词汇：run a red light ,be punished, build more footbridges / underpasses, keep orders）

注意：

1、语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

2、文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

A Report from People’s Daily

"Chinese style of crossing the road" is a ridicule(调侃)used by the net friend. It describes a way of some Chinese walking across the road, namely "enough of a person can go（凑够一撮人就走）, not red light”. Just look at other people and do not see the light. It is generally believed that as long as we cross the road together, no car dares to hit us. Here is one of the excuses given by a pedestrian (行人).

Reporter：You know, you can’t run a red light, can you?

Pedestrian：No, I can’t.

Reporter：But why did you do that just now?

Pedestrian：I am in a hurry. I’ll be late for work.

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Everyone knows rules are made for people to follow, not to break.             

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version

Rules are made for people to follow, not to break. When people cross roads, they might be in a rush for doing something, so they don’t care about the traffic rules. In this picture, groups of people are going across the road while red lights. The harm for this is that the cars would not expect the people walking across the street while the red light, and may even cause accidents.

There may be different reasons in different people. Probably you would be late. So next time, you’d better go out earlier. Someone may say since there is no car, he can cross the road. But for your safety, please wait a minute. Do not follow the ones who lead themselves to danger! I think everyone should obey the traffic rules At the same time the government had better build more footbridges or underpasses.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料为一幅图片，故动笔前先要认真观察图片，了解图片所蕴含的信息。写作中应先简单描述一下图片内容，及中国式过马路的特点，并分析原因，提出自己的建议。然后列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第二人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。注意情态动词should后面动词用原形。适当使用连词，序数词，注意从句的应用，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。