Question

15．请阅读下面的BBC广播公司World Have Your
Say："Life in China"栏目：
BBC World Have Your Say："Life in China"
Every day，BBC News on TV，radio and online brings you stories from across the world．But what we want to hear are the stories that matter to you．
Have got a story about life in China today？If you do，please put your stories here．

I like travaling and I have traveled a lot around China．During the trip，I often find that a number of Chinese don't have good pulic manners（举止）．They always loudly on the phone and smoke everywhere．The worst is that they often break the rules in public．For example，when I travled in HongKong in January this year，I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground，which is against the rules．However，the kid's mother didn't think he did wrong．Can you believe it？Let's improve our public manners． （Mike，Shenzhen）

I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor village in Fuyang，Anhui Province．Like many other left-behind children（留守儿童）in China，l live with my grandparents now．my father went to work inn Shanghai several years ago．Last year，my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before．They tell me to listen to my grandparents and call me about twice a month to ask about my study．I really miss my parents ans I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai．I think every child needs parents'love and care．（Wu Peigen，Anhui Province）

假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述报道后，你想表达自己的看法．请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？
（2）你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法．
（3）就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议．
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名．
（2）语句连贯，词数不少于80．作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Editor，
      I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，同时也是以电子邮件呈现的书面表达．注意电子邮件的格式．要求学生在阅读的基础上进行写作，是一篇读后感．先让学生根据自己阅读的情况选择自己喜欢的、感兴趣的故事；讲述自己感兴趣的原因是什么；然后对这个故事所提及的现象表达自己的看法；最后就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议．用第一人称，时态用一般现在时态．提建议时可用到"should；had beeter"等．

解答 Dear Editor，
     I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today．I am interested in Mike's story，because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou．I can't stand bad manners in public，either．
    In fact，I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas．I think it's wrong to break the rules in public．In my opinion，we should know more about good manners．On the other hand，we had better stop people around us from being rude．If we can't stop them，we can always ask the police or someone like that for help．
 Yours，
                                                                                                                                Li Ming

点评 作文写作时：仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点；提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写；根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．