Question

15．随着家庭生活条件的提高，现在的孩子或多或少会有一些零花钱．请以How to Spend Our Pocket Money为题写一段话，内容必须包括以下提示要点，词数在80-100之间．
1．你从哪里得到零花钱；2．你平常用零花钱做些什么（至少两点）；3．你觉得用零花钱还可以做些什么更有意义的事（至少两点）．
注意：1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名：2．文章的标题和开头已付出，不计入总词数．
How to Spend Our Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life，we kids can have some pocket money                         

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
 I think I can do something more meaningful我想我可以做一些更有意义的事．
复合句的应用，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
 I can also donate my pocket money to help poor children in western areas of China so that they can live happily．我也可以把我的零花钱捐出来帮助在中国的西部地区的贫困儿童，让他们可以快乐地生活．
这是so taht 引导的目的状语从句，以便于…．

解答 How to Spend Our Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life，we kids can have some pocket money．I usually get my pocket money from my parents．Sometimes，I can get some by selling waste paper and bottles．（从哪里得到零花钱）I often use my pocket money to buy breakfast on my way to school．I also buy some books to help me with my lessons with my pocket money．（用零花钱做些什么）I think I can do something more meaningful【高分句型一】．For example，I can go travelling to a tourist attraction to enjoy myself in the summer holidays．I can also donate my pocket money to help poor children in western areas of China so that they can live happily．【高分句型二】（要点三，用零花钱还可以做些什么更有意义的事）

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．