Question

书面表达 (本大题共5分)

学校将举行初中英语征文比赛，主题是介绍你的朋友Nick，请你根据下列要点完成征文。

1. 勤奋而有耐心，总是乐于助人，经常帮同学辅导数学难题。

2. 我7岁时就跟他交上了朋友。

3. 他愿意替我保守秘密，所以我什么都可以告诉他。

4. 他痴迷于自己动手做，他喜欢修坏了的东西。

5. 他妈妈的生日要到了，他决定……

注意：

1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 第5 要点的内容须用1～2句话作适当发挥；

3. 词数70个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality.

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How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

 

Answer 1

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality. He is hardworking and patient. He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems. I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He is crazy about DIY. He likes repairing broken things. His mother’s birthday is coming. He decided to make a birthday card for her by himself. (His mother is sure to like it.

How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是介绍了自己的朋友Nick，他有很多优点是一个值得交往的朋友。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑 文中介绍了朋友很多的优点，最后引出在他母亲生日的时候他决定给母亲亲自制作一个卡片。He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems.；I made friends with him when I was 7 years old.这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。