Question

为了使同学们更加健康地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假设你叫张立，用英语向校长写一封80个词左右的建议信。所写内容必须包括表格中你对学校和老师的建议,并适当说明理由。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
our school  our teachers   Suggestions for a Better School Life
1. open the library more often
2. organize more after-class activities
3. give us longer vacations
Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.____________________________________                  
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Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have
a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First , I hope our school
will open the library more often. Reading more books can help us open up our eyes
to the outside world. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class
activities. And I think we should be allowed to have longer vacations because we
need more time to do things like volunteering.
As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes moreinteresting.
And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested
in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give
us less homework and finish class on time.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li

本题是写一篇给定材料的建议信，书写时，应注意建议信的格式和书信的格式相似，
信结尾写上祝愿语和写信人，信的主要内容为谈论如何有一个更好的校园生活，给老师提出
的建议和要求，给学校提出的建议和要求，写作时应注意一般现在时和一般将来时的合理使
用，条件状语从句，宾语从句等多种句式的使用，同时要注意语言的准确性和连贯性。