Question

李华的哥哥在MH370失联飞机中遇难，到现在一直还很伤心，总是一个人呆在房间，不和别人说话, 请你以王强的名义写一封信给他，给他一些建议，鼓励他振作起来。

要求：1．必须用上所有提示词，可适当发挥；

2．词数要求：60～80。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词: talk with, get help from, take exercise, relax yourself, smile at life

Dear Li Hua, June 10th , 2014

I'm sorry to hear that your brother was in the flight MH370. _________________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours, Wang Qiang

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua, June 10th , 2014

I'm sorry to hear that your brother was in the flight MH370. When I knew that you lost your brother, I felt very sad. I know you still your brother, but it is useless. I think you shouldn’t stay in your room by yourself all the time. You should learn how to deal with sadness and relax yourself. For example, you can talk with your friends or teachers. Maybe you can get help from them. You'd better go out to take exercise or go to the movies with your friends. Take good care of yourself and smile at life!

Best wishes!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求以王强的名义写一封信给李华，首先就李华的哥哥在MH370失联飞机中遇难表示遗憾，然后给他一些建议，鼓励他振作起来。注意建议的句式的应用。像You should，You'd better，you can，you shouldn’t等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。在提出建议时用到了多个句式，如You should，You'd better，you can，you shouldn’t等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 使句式应用时不僵化。

考点：话题作文。