Question

你的好友David感冒了，你写信告诉他一些注意事项，提一些合理的建议。60字左右。

Dear David,

I am sorry to hear that you have a cold.

 

 

 

 

 

Yours

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear David,

I am sorry to hear that you have a cold. You should see a doctor. And you should take medicine on time. You also should take more exercise, because it is helpful to your health. You had better drink more hot water .Don’t forget to wear more! And you should have a balanced diet，and eat more fruit and vegetables. It is important to keep healthy.

I hope you will be better soon.

Yours

Lihua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍好友生病了，给他提出注意事项和一些建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：You should……；because it is……；You had better……；It is important to ……;I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达希望好友尽快恢复健康的愿望。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表达对好友生病了而感到难过，接下来介绍他应注意事项和一些建议，最后表达希望好友尽快恢复健康的愿望。此处用了take medicine，take more exercise，is helpful to，forget to，have a balanced diet等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。